Today is the first day of the SLJ (Summer Learning Journey) for 2020 - 2021. I hope you guys have all had an awesome year, I know Covid gave us all a shock but we have stayed strong together and hopefully we are able to get rid of it. The first activity on SJL is about leaving a positive, thoughtful and helpful comment on other students blogs.
I have taken a screenshot of a comment I wrote on a students blog from Waikowhai primary school. I think my comment is a quality comment because I have left a positive comment by complementing his post and I have asked him to proofread his work and I have also asked a question so hopefully he will reply back to me.
I hope you enjoyed my post. Let me know what you think of my comment that I left for Mahdi.
Bye:)
Mōrena Hamzah,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Charlotte and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I really enjoyed reading the quality comment you posted.
I noticed that you asked some fantastic questions in your comment and I think that it is great that you are wanting a reply! I also like putting questions in my comments and I love it when I get a reply from a student!
The post that you commented on was about a slip n slide, did you choose this post because you enjoy water slides? I think that water slides are so much fun! Have you ever made your own water slide down the side of a hill?
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Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey
KIA ORA Charlotte
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog post.Yes I chose slip n slide post because it looks really fun and we are planning in the holidays to go to my grandparents farm and do a slip n slide there because they have a big hill.Have you ever done slip n slide? BYE:)
Kia Ora Hamzah,
DeleteI have done slip n slides before! I think that they are so much fun - especially in summer! What other things do you like to do in summer?
Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey